Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are a university student named Alex Martinez, and you are…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively addresses the task requirements and maintains a polite tone, but it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. Improving sentence structure and vocabulary precision would enhance the overall quality.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear Introduction — “My name is [name withheld] and I am a university student currently enrolled in our Engineering Club.”
- Direct Request — “I would like to enquire whether you have this tech available on the required date as it is very necessary for smooth operations in our event.”
To improve
- Incorrect Name Try: [name withheld]
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