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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively addresses the task requirements and maintains a polite tone, but it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. Improving sentence structure and vocabulary precision would enhance the overall quality.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear Introduction — “My name is Alex Martinez and I am a university student currently enrolled in our Engineering Club.”
- Direct Request — “I would like to enquire whether you have this tech available on the required date as it is very necessary for smooth operations in our event.”
To improve
- Incorrect Name Try: Alex Martinez
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