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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issue with the printer and requests assistance, showing a clear understanding of the task. However, grammatical errors and limited syntactic variety detract from the overall quality of the response.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear description of the problem — “The printer has worked well for the past 3 days but suddenly it no longer prints any image or words clearly and starts making an alarm sound when asked to reprint.”
- Attempted solutions — “I have tried restarting it multiple times and rebooting it as was advised in the manual given with it to no avail unfortunately, and the problem has continued.”
- Request for resolution — “Kindly help me resolve this issue or kindly offer a replacement as this is disrupting my daily work.”
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