Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are considering applying to a study abroad program in Spain for…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively addresses the necessary questions and maintains a polite tone. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks specific details that would enhance clarity and depth.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I'm reaching out to ask follow-up questions regarding housing options for the Spanish program, which will start next semester.”
- Expresses enthusiasm — “I've been always looking forward to an opportunity to experience Spanish culture immersively in local.”
- Gratitude — “Thank you for your time.”
To improve
- Lack of specificity Try: I would appreciate it if you could provide details on how credits will transfer to my home institution and the specific application deadlines.
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