4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email is clear and polite, addressing all the necessary points. While the language is mostly accurate, it lacks the sophistication and precise vocabulary needed for a higher score. Minor errors are present, but they do not significantly impede understanding.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
25 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am eager to apply for an internship at Tech Innovations Inc and I would like to inquire about which specific documents are required for the application.”
- Gratitude expression — “Finally, I would be grateful if you could provide more information regarding the enrollment procedure.”
To improve
- Lack of specific request Try: provide more information regarding how to submit the application documents.
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