4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively addresses all the task requirements with clear and polite language. While the vocabulary is appropriate, it lacks the sophistication needed for a higher score. Minor improvements in phrasing could enhance the overall quality.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
24 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear request for clarification — “I am writing to inquire about the key concepts of wave-particle duality.”
- Request for additional resources — “I would appreciate it if you could recommend some useful resources for a better understanding of the topic.”
- Inquiry about office hours — “Finally, I would like to ask if there are any upcoming office hours or sessions where we can discuss this topic in more detail.”
To improve
- Lack of specificity in the request for clarification Try: Additionally, could you clarify the specific aspects of wave-particle duality that were discussed in class?
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