Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are interested in joining the Green Earth Initiative, a community…
4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
This is a well-structured and polite email that clearly communicates your intent. To improve, try to vary your sentence beginnings and use more descriptive language to demonstrate your interest in sustainable practices.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
24 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear and Direct Opening — “I am writing to inquire about the community program named Green Earth Initiative.”
To improve
- Incomplete Content Coverage Try: I would like to inquire about the schedule as well as the specific topics covered in the upcoming workshops.
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