Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are a junior at Riverdale University majoring in Environmental…
2.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email attempts to inquire about the internship requirements but lacks clarity and detail. It contains multiple grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which hinder comprehension. To improve, focus on providing clear, specific questions and ensuring grammatical accuracy.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
15 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
2/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear intent — “I am writing to inquire about the internship application requirements and specific responsibilities.”
To improve
- Lack of clarity in requests Try: I would appreciate it if you could clarify which specific documents are required for the submission process.
- Incomplete question about deadline Try: Could you please confirm the deadline for the applications and provide the address or email where I should send my documents?
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