Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are Alex Smith, a graduate student at Greenfield University…
3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the main points but lacks depth and contains multiple grammatical errors. Improving the clarity and accuracy of the language would enhance the overall effectiveness of the message.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear intent to renew lease — “I would like to talk with you to renew my contract for next year.”
- Expression of satisfaction — “I have really enjoyed living in this apartment.”
To improve
- Lack of detail in maintenance inquiry Try: Could you please provide details about any scheduled maintenance or updates planned for the upcoming year?
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