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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the main points but lacks depth and contains multiple grammatical errors. Improving the clarity and accuracy of the language would enhance the overall effectiveness of the message.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear intent to renew lease — “I would like to talk with you to renew my contract for next year.”
- Expression of satisfaction — “I have really enjoyed living in this apartment.”
To improve
- Lack of detail in maintenance inquiry Try: Could you please provide details about any scheduled maintenance or updates planned for the upcoming year?
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