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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
You successfully addressed all parts of the prompt and maintained a professional tone. To improve, focus on noun-verb agreement and avoid using 'equipments' as a plural noun, as 'equipment' is an uncountable noun in English.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear statement of purpose — “I am writing you to inquire about detailed information for pricing and availability of audio-visual equipment.”
- Specific inclusion of event details — “15th November”
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