Write an Email — scored sample answer
You signed up for a gym membership three months ago. Due to a change…
3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the intent to cancel the membership and requests necessary information, but it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks sophistication in vocabulary and sentence structure. Improvements in language accuracy and elaboration would enhance clarity and professionalism.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear explanation of the reason for cancellation — “my work timings have changed from 5:00 pm to 11:00 pm and will remain as such for the upcoming 4 months.”
- Request for confirmation
To improve
- Lack of detailed inquiry about cancellation procedure Try: Could you please provide detailed information on the cancellation procedures and any associated fees?
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