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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the intent to cancel the membership and requests necessary information, but it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks sophistication in vocabulary and sentence structure. Improvements in language accuracy and elaboration would enhance clarity and professionalism.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear explanation of the reason for cancellation — “my work timings have changed from 5:00 pm to 11:00 pm and will remain as such for the upcoming 4 months.”
- Request for confirmation — “I would also like to recieve a written reciept for the end of my membership.”
To improve
- Lack of detailed inquiry about cancellation procedure Try: Could you please provide detailed information on the cancellation procedures and any associated fees?
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