Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are planning a team-building event for your university's…
3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the necessary information but suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that hinder clarity. Improved sentence structure and attention to language accuracy would enhance the overall effectiveness.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear Purpose
- Specific Date Mentioned — “for March 15th”
- Expresses Gratitude — “Thanks for considering, I look forward to hearing from you.”
To improve
- Incomplete Inquiry Try: Could you also inform me if your services include audio-visual equipment or catering options?
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