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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the necessary information but suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that hinder clarity. Improved sentence structure and attention to language accuracy would enhance the overall effectiveness.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear Purpose — “I am writing this email about an event for my university's rnvironmental club”
- Specific Date Mentioned — “for March 15th”
- Expresses Gratitude — “Thanks for considering, I look forward to hearing from you.”
To improve
- Incomplete Inquiry Try: Could you also inform me if your services include audio-visual equipment or catering options?
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