Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are interested in joining the Green Earth Initiative, a community…
3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email successfully addresses the main points but suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that hinder clarity. While the tone is generally appropriate, the lack of syntactic variety and precision in language detracts from the overall effectiveness.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am witing to ask you about the upcoming workshop starting in March 2024.”
- Expresses enthusiasm — “I am very enthusiastic to learn more about environmental conversation program.”
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