Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are a university student named Alex Chen majoring in Creative…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively introduces the author and provides a synopsis of the story, but the author bio is underdeveloped. Additionally, there are several grammatical errors that detract from the overall clarity and professionalism of the email.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear introduction
- Concise synopsis — “The story follows a young woman, who discovers a mysterious forest where whispers revel forgotten memories.”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration in author bio Try: I have written several short stories for university publications and literary workshops, gaining valuable experience in crafting narratives and exploring diverse themes.
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