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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the intent to renew the lease and inquire about rent changes and maintenance. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks syntactic variety, which detracts from its overall clarity and professionalism.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am Alex Smith writing to renew my lease as a tenant.”
- Inquiry about rent changes — “tell me that will it be on the current rental amount or there will be any change in that”
- Request for maintenance information — “I would also like to know about the upcoming maintenance and upgradation schedule”
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