Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
4.0/ 5
GoodGenerally Successful
The email is clear and addresses all required points effectively, demonstrating a good command of language. However, minor grammatical errors and a lack of sophisticated vocabulary limit its score.
25 / 30
Advanced
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I recently purchased a laptop from an online electronics store, but I received a different model than the one I ordered.”
- Request for instructions — “I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide instructions for returning the incorrect item.”
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