Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issues experienced during a special occasion, maintaining a polite tone throughout. However, it contains several grammatical errors and lacks the depth of detail that would enhance the overall quality.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear Purpose — “I am writing to submit a complaint.”
- Specific Occasion Mentioned — “I celebrated my birthday at the Italian restaurant last weekend.”
To improve
- Lack of Specificity Try: The dishes lacked seasoning and flavor, making them unappetizing.
- Resolution Suggestion Try: I would appreciate a refund or a complimentary meal to compensate for the inconvenience.
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