Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are a university student interested in attending the 'Leadership…
4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email is well-structured and addresses all required points with clear language. It uses appropriate social conventions, but the vocabulary and syntax could be more varied and sophisticated to achieve a higher score.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
24 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear purpose
- Effective inquiry — “Additionally, I would like to inquire about the available payment methods for the registration.”
To improve
- Lack of specificity Try: I have been looking forward to this workshop since I first heard about it two years ago.
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