3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The response adequately addresses the task but suffers from limited elaboration and several language errors. The syntax is simple, and there are noticeable issues with article usage and phrasing. Improving language accuracy and adding more specific details could enhance the score.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Acknowledgment of the issue — “I apologize for disturbing you.”
- Explanation of the delay — “I had a family emergency that I need to resolve.”
- Expression of gratitude — “Thank you for your time and attention.”
To improve
- Lack of specific new submission date Try: Could you please consider allowing me to submit the essay by November 17, 2023?
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