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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email demonstrates an attempt to fulfill the task requirements but suffers from vague elaboration and noticeable grammatical errors. Improvements in clarity and specificity would enhance the overall effectiveness of the communication.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Expresses gratitude — “I appreicate how informative your workshop is.”
- Request for additional materials — “I would greatly appreicate it if you could provide me with a copy of the presentaion slides, which was shown during the event?”
- Highlights usefulness of the workshop — “it helps me alot to have better understanding to all complex concepts of digital marketing,which was very useful.”
To improve
- Lack of specificity Try: which was very useful, especially the section on social media strategies.
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