Write an Email — scored sample answer
You recently attended a workshop on digital marketing strategies…
3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email demonstrates an attempt to fulfill the task requirements but suffers from vague elaboration and noticeable grammatical errors. Improvements in clarity and specificity would enhance the overall effectiveness of the communication.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Expresses gratitude
- Request for additional materials — “I would greatly appreicate it if you could provide me with a copy of the presentaion slides, which was shown during the event?”
- Highlights usefulness of the workshop — “it helps me alot to have better understanding to all complex concepts of digital marketing,which was very useful.”
To improve
- Lack of specificity Try: which was very useful, especially the section on social media strategies.
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