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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the heating issue and its impact, demonstrating adequate elaboration. However, frequent grammatical errors and limited syntactic variety hinder clarity and overall effectiveness.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear identification of the problem — “the heating system is not turning on”
- Explanation of personal impact — “this issue is afecting my routine because I usually work in home office”
- Request for a specific timeline — “I urgently request a repair next Monday, from nine am to five pm”
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