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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively addresses the necessary inquiries regarding the internship application. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing that detracts from overall clarity and professionalism.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am writing this email regarding your Summer internship program, which is upcoming.”
- Specific inquiry — “could you please confirm what is the project proposal, which is a requirement for this position?”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration Try: I have a few specific questions regarding the application process and requirements for this position.
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