Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are a junior at Riverdale University majoring in Environmental…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively addresses the necessary inquiries regarding the internship application. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing that detracts from overall clarity and professionalism.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear purpose
- Specific inquiry — “could you please confirm what is the project proposal, which is a requirement for this position?”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration Try: I have a few specific questions regarding the application process and requirements for this position.
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