Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are Alex Chen, a graduate student at Crestwood University. You…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the intent to adopt a dog and reassures the landlord about cleanliness. However, it contains several grammatical errors and lacks specific details about the writer's lifestyle, which limits its overall effectiveness.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Expresses appreciation for the apartment — “this new apartment is amazing with a great view and space”
- Mentions attending dog training classes — “I have been attending some dog training classes to prepare my pet”
- Expresses willingness to comply with requirements — “If I need any additional requirement please let me know”
To improve
- Lack of specific details about lifestyle fit Try: I am considering adopting a small dog because it will fit well with my active lifestyle and provide companionship during my studies.
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