2.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email demonstrates an attempt to provide feedback but lacks depth and clarity in addressing the technical issues faced. There are multiple grammatical errors and vague expressions that detract from the overall effectiveness of the communication.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
15 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
2/5Breakdown
Working well
- Expresses gratitude — “Thank you for bringing the knowledge to us.”
- Mentions valuable content — “I have learned a lot of knowledge about it.”
- Shows willingness to share knowledge — “I would like to share this course to my friends.”
To improve
- Lacks description of technical issues Try: Include specific technical difficulties experienced, such as 'I encountered frequent connectivity issues and difficulty accessing course materials.'
- Missing specific suggestions for improvement Try: Provide specific suggestions, such as 'It would be helpful to have additional resources or a Q&A session on transformers.'
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