Write an Email — scored sample answer
A local bookstore has posted a sign looking for part-time help on…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively conveys interest in the position and outlines relevant experience, but it suffers from grammatical errors and limited vocabulary. Improved sentence structure and more precise language would enhance clarity and professionalism.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Expresses interest clearly
- Relevant experience mentioned — “I have worked in the campus library in summers.”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration on skills Try: I am studying Languages, which has enhanced my communication skills and attention to detail, and I love reading, which keeps me informed about various genres and authors.
- Unclear question about the application process Try: Could you please provide more details about the application process and clarify the work schedule for this position?
Answer this prompt yourself
Write your own answer to this question and get the same TOEFL 2026 feedback — from $7.49 every one week, cancel any time.
Level Up Your Email Writing
Your path to improvement
Master professional email writing with our expert guides. Learn the perfect structure, tone, and phrases to score 5/5 every time.
Email Writing Guide
Professional tone and structure for the Write an Email task
TOEFL Writing Templates
Effective templates and phrases for TOEFL writing
Common Grammar Mistakes
Top grammar errors that hurt your TOEFL score