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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively conveys interest in the position and outlines relevant experience, but it suffers from grammatical errors and limited vocabulary. Improved sentence structure and more precise language would enhance clarity and professionalism.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Expresses interest clearly — “I would like to inform you that I am really interested in this part time job.”
- Relevant experience mentioned — “I have worked in the campus library in summers.”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration on skills Try: I am studying Languages, which has enhanced my communication skills and attention to detail, and I love reading, which keeps me informed about various genres and authors.
- Unclear question about the application process Try: Could you please provide more details about the application process and clarify the work schedule for this position?
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