Write an Email — scored sample answer
A local animal shelter is looking for volunteers to help with dog…
4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email is well-structured and polite, effectively addressing all requirements. However, it could benefit from more specific details to enhance engagement and clarity.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
24 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear expression of interest — “I am writing to express my interest in volunteering at your animal shelter.”
- Specific availability
To improve
- Lack of specific details Try: Before applying, could you please provide details on any training programs required for volunteers, such as duration and content?
- Vague inquiry about commitment Try: Furthermore, could you specify the expected commitment, including the typical number of hours per week and the minimum duration of service required?
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