Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the writer's concerns and request for a refund, demonstrating an understanding of the task. However, grammatical errors and a lack of syntactic variety detract from the overall clarity and professionalism of the response.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear statement of issue — “Firstly,I started the classes knowing that they were beginner friendly but with time I have realised that is not the case.”
- Skill level description — “Currently I am at level A1 whereas, the programe is being taught on b2 level, which is significantly harder for me to keep up with.”
To improve
- Lack of detailed elaboration Try: Firstly, I enrolled in the course because it was advertised as beginner-friendly. However, after completing the first two modules, I found the content to be too advanced for my current skills.
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