Write an Email — scored sample answer
You recently purchased a laptop from an online electronics store, but…
3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email adequately addresses the task but contains several language errors and lacks syntactic variety. While social conventions are handled well, improving language accuracy and elaboration would enhance clarity and effectiveness.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear Purpose — “Recently, I bought a laptop from your website, but I received a different model.”
- Order Information Provided — “My number order is 123456.”
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