3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates appreciation and requests the slides, with a specific part highlighted. However, minor grammatical errors and basic vocabulary limit the score. Improving language accuracy and adding more syntactic variety could enhance the response.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Expresses appreciation — “I would like to express my sincere appreciation for the informative and engaging workshop.”
- Specific part of the presentation — “the part of the workshop where the local business group discussed how to use cutting-edge technology for future digital marketing strategies was particularly useful to me.”
- Clear request for slides
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