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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email successfully conveys the necessary information and requests. However, it contains several grammatical errors and lacks sophisticated sentence structures, limiting its overall effectiveness.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clearly states booking details and original flight information — “My name is John Peter. I have a paid online ticket from NJ to Boston on tuesday 03/21/2024 3:30 pm ticket number is ew2224rr54.”
- Clearly explains the reason for the change request — “Unfortunately, my business meeting has been rescheduled to 03/22/2024, and I need to change my flight date.”
- Asks about options for rescheduling or credits — “Could you assist me please, to change it or the semi-refund options you provide?”
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