Write an Email — scored sample answer
Your business meeting has been rescheduled, and you need to change…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email successfully conveys the necessary information and requests. However, it contains several grammatical errors and lacks sophisticated sentence structures, limiting its overall effectiveness.
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21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clearly states booking details and original flight information
- Clearly explains the reason for the change request — “Unfortunately, my business meeting has been rescheduled to 03/22/2024, and I need to change my flight date.”
- Asks about options for rescheduling or credits — “Could you assist me please, to change it or the semi-refund options you provide?”
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