Write an Email — scored sample answer
You ordered a set of textbooks titled 'Advanced Business…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the urgency of the situation and includes all necessary details. However, grammatical errors and a lack of varied sentence structure detract from the overall quality.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear identification — “My name is [name withheld].”
- Stating urgency — “I need these books urgently as my course begins on October 15th.”
To improve
- Attachment reference Try: Please check the attached order form.
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