Write an Email — scored sample answer
You recently attended a 'Digital Marketing Mastery' workshop…
4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
This email effectively communicates the issues and request for a refund. The language is clear and appropriate for the context, and all task requirements are met. Minor enhancements in sentence structure complexity could elevate the response further.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
24 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear and direct purpose statement — “I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding the 'Digital Marketing Mastery' workshop I attended on September 15, 2023, and to request a full refund of the $150 fee.”
- Specific and detailed enumeration of issues
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