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4.0/ 5
GoodGenerally Successful
This email effectively communicates the issues and request for a refund. The language is clear and appropriate for the context, and all task requirements are met. Minor enhancements in sentence structure complexity could elevate the response further.
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Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear and direct purpose statement — “I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding the 'Digital Marketing Mastery' workshop I attended on September 15, 2023, and to request a full refund of the $150 fee.”
- Specific and detailed enumeration of issues — “The workshop was advertised as having hands-on sessions and personalized feedback, but I found it to be poorly organized with no interactive elements or feedback provided. Additionally, the workshop started late, and the promised guest speaker did not attend.”
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