3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the intent to cancel the subscription and requests necessary confirmations. However, it suffers from repetitive phrasing and several grammatical errors, which hinder clarity and overall effectiveness.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear identification — “My name is [name withheld].”
- Clear request for confirmation
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