Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the intent to cancel the subscription and requests confirmation, but it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks a professional tone. Improvements in language accuracy and syntactic variety are needed for a higher score.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear Request — “I am writing to request a cancelation for my recent subscription, which I do not need it anymore.”
- Specific Request for Confirmation — “I would also ask if you could send me an email that confirm the cancellation once it happend.”
To improve
- Lack of Clarity Try: Could you please inform me of the steps I need to take to cancel my subscription?
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