Write an Email — scored sample answer
You recently subscribed to 'StudySmart', an online platform offering…
3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the intent to cancel the subscription and requests confirmation, but it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks a professional tone. Improvements in language accuracy and syntactic variety are needed for a higher score.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear Request — “I am writing to request a cancelation for my recent subscription, which I do not need it anymore.”
- Specific Request for Confirmation
To improve
- Lack of Clarity Try: Could you please inform me of the steps I need to take to cancel my subscription?
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