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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the request and rationale, showing a clear understanding of the task. However, grammatical errors and a lack of syntactic variety limit the overall effectiveness.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am writing this email regarding an online course, which I enrolled in a few days ago.”
- Acknowledging fairness — “I understand this requirement could be unfair for other people, but I have to tell you that this course was advertised as beginner - friendly.”
To improve
- Clarity Try: I encountered difficulties understanding the complex concepts presented in the course.
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