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4.0/ 5
GoodGenerally Successful
The email is well-structured and polite, successfully conveying the necessary information. However, it contains a few grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that detract from its overall quality.
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4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear reference to existing appointment — “I have an appointment with Dr. Labeeb (orthopedic surgeon) scheduled for next Monday on 5 PM for an annual checkup.”
- Proposes alternative dates — “I request for a postpone to my appointment to be next Thursday, or Friday if applicable.”
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