4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively confirms registration, inquires about payment methods, and asks about materials needed. It maintains a polite tone and uses appropriate language, though it could benefit from more sophisticated vocabulary and a more formal greeting.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
25 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am writing to inquire about the confirmation of my registration for the workshop”
- Specific inquiry — “Could you please let me know whether this payment method is accepted?”
To improve
- Lack of sophisticated language Try: Lastly, could you kindly inform me of any specific tools or materials that participants are expected to bring to the workshop?
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