Write an Email — scored sample answer
You applied for a merit-based scholarship three weeks ago. The…
2.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email addresses the basic requirements but lacks sufficient detail and clarity. Numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing detract from the overall effectiveness, making it hard to follow.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
15 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
2.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Expresses continued interest — “I still interested in the scholarship.”
- Attempts to inquire about the timeline
- Includes a call to action — “Please send let me know by email or website.”
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