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2.5/ 5
FairMostly Unsuccessful
The email addresses the basic requirements but lacks sufficient detail and clarity. Numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing detract from the overall effectiveness, making it hard to follow.
16 / 30
Basic
Content
2.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2.5/5
Complete response2.5/5
Addresses requirements2.5/5
Working well
- Expresses continued interest — “I still interested in the scholarship.”
- Attempts to inquire about the timeline — “Have you announce the scholarship decisions yet?”
- Includes a call to action — “Please send let me know by email or website.”
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