3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the request and maintains a polite tone, which is a strength. However, the presence of grammatical errors and awkward phrasing detracts from the overall clarity and professionalism of the response.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear request — “I kindly ask for your approval and extension for one week more.”
- Willingness to pay fees — “If you need any additional cost about this matter, I am at your disposal.”
To improve
- Lack of specific apology Try: I apologize for not returning the book on time and am writing to request a possible loan extension
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