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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issue and includes necessary details, but it suffers from a critical error in the order number and some minor language inaccuracies. Overall, it demonstrates adequate understanding of the task but lacks the sophistication needed for a higher score.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear identification of the issue — “the battery does not hold a charge for more than two hours, which is much shorter than the advertised eight hours.”
- Expresses anticipation for a response — “I look forward to your response at your earliest convenience.”
To improve
- Incorrect order number Try: My order number is TP12345.
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