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GoodPartially Successful

3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric

The email effectively addresses the necessary points but lacks specific details and contains several grammatical errors. Improving the tone and correcting the mistakes would enhance the overall quality of the response.

Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate

22 / 30

legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale

Content

3.5/5

Breakdown

Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5

Working well

  • Clear purpose — “I am writing to ask about required notice period for moving out.
  • Request for information — “I would like to inquire about any penalties or charges for breaking the lease early.

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