Write an Email — scored sample answer
A local environmental organization is offering summer internships…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively conveys interest and relevant experience but lacks specificity in elaboration. Additionally, there are several grammar errors that detract from the overall clarity and professionalism of the message.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Expresses passion for environmental conservation
- Mentions relevant experience — “I have been participating in these kinds of projects for several years.”
- Inquires about internship details — “I would like to ask you about duties and possible assignments for this important internship.”
To improve
- Vague elaboration on experience Try: Provide specific examples or details about the projects, such as the skills gained or the impact made, to strengthen the application.
- Unclear request for application information Try: Rephrase to: 'Could you please provide details on the application requirements and the deadline?' for clarity and professionalism.
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