Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are a university student interested in attending the 'Leadership…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively confirms participation and inquires about payment and materials, demonstrating an appropriate tone. However, it contains several grammatical errors and lacks varied sentence structures, which detracts from its overall effectiveness.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear expression of intent — “I write this email to confirm that will participate in this session.”
- Expresses gratitude — “Thank you for your time, and I look forward to hearing from you.”
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