Write an Email — scored sample answer
You had a job interview last week for a marketing position at a tech…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively conveys gratitude and interest in the position, but it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improving sentence structure and correcting errors would enhance clarity and professionalism.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Expresses gratitude — “I am writing to show my gratitude for choosing my name for the interview process at the marketing position at the tech company.”
- Shows enthusiasm — “Work with your professional and highly efficient team would be a dream come true.”
- Offers additional information — “Please let me know if any kind of information is needed from my side.”
To improve
- Lack of specificity in inquiry Try: Could you please provide an update on the expected timeline for the hiring decision?
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