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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively inquires about lease renewal and potential rent changes, but it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improvements in sentence structure and clarity would enhance the overall effectiveness of the communication.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear Purpose — “I am writing to inquire if it be possible I could renew my lease for another year.”
- Direct Inquiry — “I would greatly appreciate it if you could inform me, if there are any changes to the current rent amount.”
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