Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are planning to attend a professional conference next month, but…
2.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
This email attempts to address the prompt's requirements but is significantly hindered by numerous grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. While the intent is understandable, the language accuracy issues make it difficult to fully comprehend the specific concerns and requests.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
15 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
2.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clearly expresses excitement about attending the conference. — “I am [name withheld] really excited to attend the upcoming conference”
- States the main purpose of the email directly in the opening.
- Asks a specific question about the registration process. — “whether I can do spot registration or not”
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