Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are planning to attend a professional conference next month, but…
3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email shows an adequate attempt to express excitement and inquire about details, but it suffers from grammar issues and vague phrasing. Improving the precision of language and correcting errors would enhance clarity and effectiveness.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Expresses enthusiasm — “how keen I am to attend the conference next month,and be part of this great event.”
- Expresses gratitude — “Thank you for your time and consideration.”
To improve
- Lack of clarity in event details inquiry Try: what topics the keynote speakers will cover?
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