Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are a junior at State University majoring in Environmental…
3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email meets the task requirements but lacks detailed elaboration and exhibits basic syntax. Noticeable errors in language accuracy and social conventions limit the score. Improving sentence variety and addressing minor errors would enhance the response.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear introduction — “My name is [name withheld], and I am a junior student at State University, studying Environmental Science.”
- Expresses motivation — “I am convinced that these opportunities will play a vital role in shaping my future opportunities and long-term career development.”
To improve
- Lack of specific connection to the lecture Try: I was inspired by your recent lecture on marine conservation efforts and am eager to learn more about marine organisms.
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