Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are a sophomore at Greenfield University interested in joining…
3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email demonstrates a clear intent to join the Eco Warriors Club and includes relevant personal background. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which detract from overall clarity and effectiveness.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear expression of eagerness — “I am very eager to participate in this program”
- Relevant background experience — “I have spent my entire life by participating in local NGOS in which we plant trees and take steps that protects our nature.”
To improve
- Lack of clarity in membership process inquiry Try: Could you please provide details on how I can become a member and any upcoming meetings or events I should attend?
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