Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the main issues encountered during the workshop and the request for a refund. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks the depth of elaboration needed for a higher score.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear identification — “My name is Ryuya Inoue.”
- Specific details — “I recently attended a workshop organized by 'ProLearn Workshops' on September 15, 2023.”
To improve
- Refund request clarity Try: I would greatly appreciate a refund of the $150 workshop fee.
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