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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the writer's interest in the research project and maintains a polite tone throughout. However, spelling errors and a lack of specific details limit the overall effectiveness of the message.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear Introduction — “I am a sophomore at Greenfield University majoring in Environmantal Science.”
- Expresses Interest — “I have recently developed an interest in this field from attending one of your captivating lectures in Marine Biology 202.”
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